I added a description to the Youtube upload, it discusses a few things about the first draft that I would like to change or add to improve the quality of my product. I still have a very long way to go and need to reshoot a lot of the content.
You need establishing shots to set the scene - perhaps a whole scene at the start which explains the purpose of the documentary. If this were a news clip there would be a presenter talking direct to camera.
You need establishing shots to set the scene - perhaps a whole scene at the start which explains the purpose of the documentary. If this were a news clip there would be a presenter talking direct to camera.
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