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I decided to take the comments that had been made on my blog and look at how I can use these to improve my work.

The first comment is on my general documentary research, it says that I need to narrow it down. I need to look into other documentary styles like the one I hope to achieve and see how I can use the camera angles or general conventions to create my own documentary.





The above two comments are feedback on my practice establishing shots. It is positive feedback but as I have never filmed anything like this before there is definitely room for improvement. I need to think about the angle at which I film my scenes and the steadiness of the camera. Although the rest of my documentary is handheld and this can be told from the way I am shooting, it is still quite steady. I plan to re-shoot the outside scenes again with a tripod and try the technique that has been suggested to me.

The above problem and or comment I have addressed on the post by adding critque of the work and videos myself so that I know how I plan to change what I am doing, as well as explaining it fully. (Post is entitled First Interview Clips) 

Again I have listened back to the voki on this post and added a description and evaluation to the post itself in order to show how I have understood my thought process and how I plan to act on it.  (Post is entitled Further Suggestions and Brainstorming)

The final comment I received is for me to show clearly the distinction between how I changed my style of questioning, I shall upload an early video and a later video when I changed my questioning technique to the post and make sure I state how I changed it and why I decided to do so.